Oaisis Prolauge Page 1 Speedpaint

Meh, here it is! A speedpaint of Tone (Before the accident) And its the first page of the prolauge. Tell me what you think (Should I do it over?) And I played both pieces of Music on the piano:D Its Morning Rememberance and Abandoned Settlement. And I found the old Oaisis Logo in my computer! SQUEE! Once again, thanks for watching, and please, COMMENT, RATE, AND SUBSCRIBE! 8D Used CS3 took like 30 minutes. I think it turned out pretty good- this is my comics style. (Yes, its a comic first, then Animation later, if anyone likes it.) I had some pages up already, but they were bleh. BLEH I tell you. Anyways, please look out for new pages. Once I get the first few pages done, Ill make a vid with a link to Deviantart where you can actually read it. Please tell me what you think!